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Wednesday, March 14, 2012

Outlining & Planning Before You Write


Keep in mind that there are many, many authors who write without outlining first. They have an idea or a main character and just start writing. There is no wrong way to write a story. I taught writing to fourth graders and always had them use a Story Planner before writing so that I could see their plot before they spent a lot of time writing out the story. I like thinking about where the story needs to get to (the exciting part) so that I could help my students write a story that gets there. I do a very brief plan for picture books and slightly more detailed outline for chapter books. This is how I do it:

Picture Books

Students in first grade learn about Story Mapping. This is an exercise in breaking down a book into pieces to help with comprehension of the story.  Students learn that a story needs to have a beginning, middle, and an ending. Here are some examples of Story Mapping Worksheets from a first grade class:





Since kids have to think about what they read in this way, I use a similar approach to write picture book manuscripts. I often think of a character first since I love character driven stories so I jot down a few notes on the following things:

     Characters

     Setting

     Problem

     Important Events – Think in 3s. The mc’s first attempt to solve his/her problem doesn’t work and leads to the second attempt which doesn’t work and leads to a third attempt which either solves the problem or creates a new problem. The thing about working in 3s is that they have to make sense together and preferably are connected rather than 3 random ideas that simply don’t work. There are, of course, exceptions to every rule (and this isn’t a rule, just something I have noticed in the hundreds of books I have read).

     Solution



I also like to explain the plot this way: Main Character __________ wants to__________but can’t because __________ so __________.





Chapter Books and Early Mid Grade Novels
Taking the information I gathered in my chapter book and mid grade novel research (posted in a previous blog), I begin writing this way:
Main Character
Age
What makes this MC different?
Problem
Solution

Outline of Chapters:
I plan for 10 chapters but it can be as few as 3 and as many as 50 for a chapter book. I have read that the “sweet spot” for word count is 6,000-10,000 words for chapter books.
At the beginning, you need to show the reader (show don’t tell as often as possible) who is MC is, how old, what the setting is and what the problem or goal is?
After this is shown, let the reader know who or what is getting in the way of the MC solving his/her problem or reaching that goal.
Here come the attempts to solve the problem. Usually, the first and second attempts don’t work because something gets in the way. The first attempt leads to the second attempt which leads to either a new problem or the third attempt.
What is the new problem? Will solving it get the solution to the first problem or create a way that the MC can solve the first problem? If not, then take it out. There is no room for bird walking in picture books or chapter books.
Show how your MC makes a third attempt to solve the problem or reach the goal.
Solving the problem/conflict/reaching the goal now means what? What was the point? What was the point of getting there? Show the reader.
By now, you should be at chapter 10 or near the end of your story .  Wrap it up – Now that the problem is solved, what new problem is created?

Now go write…





13 comments:

  1. Really helpful post! Thanks for putting it together. I need to be more organized with my writing habits.

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  2. A very useful post! Thanks for sharing. Now I just have to sit down and start writing. (I've been putting it off.)

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  3. These are great tools for setting up your story. Thanks so much Alison :)

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  4. thanks for such helpful suggestions!

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  5. You Rock! Alison!!! Thank you so much for these tips and suggestions.

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  6. Alison,
    Thanks so much...I've been head banging for a few weeks, trying to get over the "hump" with a few chapters. I know where the story ends, but got stuck for a bit. I was just starting to forge past and now this post! It's what I needed to JUMP over. Thank you!!!

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  7. This is excellent, Alison. I will print it out and have it near as I work on my chapter book project.

    Thank you!

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  8. This post is timely. I'm writing a picture book and a chapter book at the moment. So I am so glad I stopped by.

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  9. Thanks for sharing the worksheets - they are great idea even for adults who are story writing!

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